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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):有意义的生活

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要求：: Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it." You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do to make your life more meaningful. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

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More Meaningful Life Life should be meaningful，All of the people want to ivie a meaningful life,But they think a meaningful life is to live happily,But this isn't a correct mandset，A meaningful life means you should do more things to make your life full,For example,Achievement are came from working,Now,Many young people didn't think working is a importent thing, Never put they point in their life,so we should abjure this behavior,We shoule work hard,Think more,Seek forward,thus,Your life will be beatiful!

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