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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
复杂句的使用不是很丰富；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构；文中能较好的使用一些学术词汇，不过拼写错误比较多。
AS we see in the picture,wo know that the parents commuciate little with their child in the way of face-to -face .While the computer contact instead the traditional way. With the development of technology,our lives become more and more colourful.The Internet is rioting in our daily lifves.It has bad influence on the way people communicatiotion.The worst fluence is that it desreases the opportunites for people to communicate face to face.And as a result ,the relationship each other is bacoming weaker and weaker. However,in my point,the Internet will never take place of the face _to_face way to commuciation.On the one hand,most people will never take the Internet all the time and they can"t contact with others by it.So the face-to-face way to commuciate is normal.On the other hand,everyone values the relationship with others aound them.They think it is polite to contact with others and they will choose the fomer to communiciate with friends and families.
鍙彲鑻辫 - 划词释义
