2002年1月英语四级作文真题:就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信

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Dear President: This letter is about canten service on campus,I have some suggestions for you,Firstly,I think the price of foods is too expensive，Even the kinds of food are less,Secondly，The environment in our canten is so good,But something should be improved,At last,The canten service is a little bad,Because on campus,People should be polite，And offer a good service for us,I hope you could hear our voice. LiMing