2002年1月英语四级作文真题:就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信

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Dear President: This letter is about can-ten service on campus,I have some suggestions for you,Firstly,I think the price of foods is too expensive，Even the kinds of food are less,Secondly，The environment in our can-ten is so good,But something should be improved,At last,The can-ten service is a little bad,Because on campus,People should be polite，And offer a good service for us,I hope you could hear our voice.We still have a long way to go. LiMing