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As we all know, nowadays, advertisement can be find everywhere in our daily life. It brings us a lot of fun, but sometimes it's also bothered us. Resently, there is a fierce debate about the influence of advertisement. Some people think that advertisement's adventage overweight it's disadwentage, but others don't think so. People think advertisement is great, because ad brings a lot of fun to them. For example, things appear at ad seems very happy and beautiful, it can made people have a good mood. However, the reason why they think ad is not so good is that ad spend a lot of money and its made the goods 's price rise up. In my oppion, ad is great, it made me see more great things that bring me a good moods and it can also guid me to buy something l really need.
