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2008年高考英语作文真题附范文(四川卷):保护环境

发布时间:2013-05-26 11:07浏览次数:750[网页划词已开启]
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你校学生会准备办一期英语墙报,主题为:保护环境从我做起。请你根据下图所示写一篇英语短文。


注意:
1.词数100左右,开关语已为你写好;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
What can I do for our environment? 
Everyone can do something for our environment. ________________________________  
用户的作文(系统评分62.0分
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作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文中词汇表达较灵活丰富,不过请检查文章的单词拼写;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。

用户练习作文:

What can I do for our environment ? Everyone can something for our environment. From the picture, we can see a boy turns on all lignts when it is 8:30 am. And wealso see a paper is made from trees. obviouslly, wasting is very terrible. In fact, more and more people don't kown how to protect our environment, it's really bad. Some people always waste water, they often turn on the water, but they don't kown turn off it. Sime people always waste another things. It's a very bad situation. As far as I'm concerned, as a teenager or a adult, we all kown how to save water,electric and so on. In other words, we should realize the importance of natural things, don't waste them. If we can do it, I believe our society will be better and better.

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