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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
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Dear KPOH, from the 15th dec,to 22th that i was holding in exhibition in NEW YORK. and i am very glad to interest the new products No.5670 of your company.pls you can send one price list with instruction of products to me asap. . i am very take pleasure in establishing business relationship with your company in future. I'm looking forward to receive your reply promptly! Best Regards Maggine
