2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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A Beautiful City in China Hi, I heard you want to visit my hometown,welcome to Hangazhou.In my opinion,I think Hangzhou is one of the most beautiful citiies in China,which is worth to visit. Hangzhou is located in south China which is richer than many cities in north.The west lake is the most formanous in Hangzhou.There are lot of legends about the west lake.We fancy to told the story of the write snake who is the snake loves the person then theri love story is borke by Fahai,at last,the snake only stay in the trower of Leifeng.We don't know the end of this story,maybe they can't meet never.How pityful! If you visit Hangzhou,i will take you around the west lake and tell the moved story.In fact, Hangzhou has many places to visit not just the west lake such as Xixi park ,Jiuxi mountain and so on. Looking forward your reply as soon as possible.I can't holpe to seeing you!