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l want to have an healthy life and more exercise. l wants to own a strong body so that he can be a volunteer to help people in need. In Kate’s opinion, her dream is to live in a beautiful and less polluted world. If she can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing around, she will be full of joy. Mary hopes to fly to HongKong to do some shopping one day because HongKong is a wonderful place to go shopping. Millie is interested in educational computer games. So she wishes to play computer games and learn something about Geography and English at the same time. My dream is to study abroad one day. I really want to make more friends and learn more about the world.When thinking of these things, we realize that we are full of life and hope. All of us believe that our dreams will come true if we try our best.
