我喜欢英语,我想在10年以后当一位英语老师。我要尽可能教好我的学生。我要尽量用英语讲课。我要努力使我的课讲得生动有趣。
另外,学生们都喜欢听老师讲故事,所以我要经常给学生讲英语故事,使他们对英语感兴趣,从而能提高他们的听力。我相信我能成为一个好老师的。
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I like English, I want to be an English teacher for ten year. I will teach my student as well as possbile , I will give my lesson to sperk English. I will try my lesson very excited. Others, The students like English teacher tell English story, so I ofren speark English story for then. so that they will be iaterested in English ang can improve their listening. I belielve that I can become good teacher.