文中词汇表达不够丰富,要多积累学术词汇;能够使用一些简单的从句;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
At the present,if the man see and listen something and they will make a conclusion that it isn't smart.They make a conclusion with no thinking. The man should think more what they see and listen.For one thing,when you see and listen anything,you should thing the more about what you see,because you should deal with the large information,and you will be make a accurate conclusion.For another,if you make a conclusion causally,you will make a false problem. In my opinion,when we see and listen anything,We should seriously consider, finally get the correct conclusion。
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