2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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Nowaday，lots of productions have a problem about excessive packaging The reason why have this situation,we can have two point to explain it.The first is the businesser.We know,it is ordinary that a good look can let more people to buy the productions.Besides,excessive packaging can help their productions to sale a higer price than others without it,so they can get more profit in it.And then, is the custmoer.lots of people have a funny thought that a nice apperrance thing can make him have more face and they consider that the apperrance is more important than the productions whether usefull or not.But there is no doubt that sometimes a good look stands for their good quality. In my opinion,excessive packaging wase too much source and it should be stop.As a customer,we should take more care about on the quality when we shop.If we keep on doing it,excessive packaging could be avoid.