2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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Nowaday，lots of productions have a problem about excessive packaging The reason why have this situation,we can have two point to explain it.The first is the business-er.We know,it is ordinary that a good look can let more people to buy the productions.Besides,excessive packaging can help their productions to sale a higer price than others without it,so they can get more profit in it.And then, is the customer.Lots of people have a funny thought that a nice apperrance thing can show their rich.In addition,they consider that the apperrance is more important than the productions whether use-full or not.But there is no doubt that sometimes a good look stands for their good quality. In my opinion,excessive packaging waste too much source and it should be stop.As a customer,we should take more care about on the quality when we shop.If we keep on doing it,excessive packaging could be avoid.