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a beautiful city in china the most interesting place l would like to take him to see is my country Wuhan Hubei province .Wuhan is the most beautiful city in my mind.there are many place of interest such as Huanghelou ,hubuxiang ,chuhehanjie . the major characteristic of Wuhan is big which has been named "the big lack the big river the big Wuhan".on the weekend ,we go sightseeing at the east lack and there will be many people who go fishing ,boating and just sit there .and ,there are many taste food in Shimenkou. he can taste all kind of snack from different place. that's Wuhan,a beautiful city
