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Nowadays, the excessive packaging，is the problem of many productions. The reason why have this situation,we can explain it in two points. One the one hand, is the business-er.We know,it is ordinary that a good look can let more people buy the productions.Besides,excessive packaging can help their productions to sale a higher price than others without it。In a world, they can get more profits in the trade. On the other hand, is the customer.Lots of people have a funny thought that a splendid thing can show their wealth.In addition,they consider that the appearance is more important than the productions whether use-full or not.But there is no doubt that sometimes a good look stands for their good quality. In my opinion,excessive packaging waste too much source and it should be stop.As a customer,we should take more care about on the quality when we shop.If we keep on doing it,excessive packaging could be avoid.
