2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

Nowadays, the excessive packaging is the problem in many productions. We can explain it in two points that why have this situation. One the one hand, is the business-er.We know,it is ordinary that a good look can let more people buy the productions.Besides,excessive packaging can help their productions to sale a higher price than others without it。In a word, they can get more profits in the transaction . On the other hand, is the customer.Lots of people have a funny thought that a splendid thing can show their wealth.In addition,they consider that the appearance is more important than the productions whether use-full or not.But there is no doubt that sometimes a good look stands for their good quality. In my opinion,excessive packaging waste too much source and it should be stop.As a customer,we should take more care about on the quality when we shop.If we keep on doing it,excessive packaging could be avoid.