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2009年专八英语作文真题:方言在公众场合使用

发布时间:2013-05-18 17:21浏览次数:10546
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题目 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
说明 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:300满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分62.5分
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句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,更能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

用户练习作文:

With cultural exchange ,dialects are just as acceptable in public places.We herit our local culture,so we can't get rid of our root.Therefore, Dialects can be acceptable in public places. Take me as an example. I am born in a peasant family ,so i have a good command of our dialect.When i chat with my classmates or teachers by my dialect, my dialect has no effect on my communication. President Xijinping is good example . He is on behalf of our china.Every time, he makes speech in chinese in the front of th world , which don't hinder communication with other countries. In a word,diaclect is our identity.Dialects are acceptable in public places.

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