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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
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From: hubin@163.com To: KPOHsales@hotmail.com subject: to establish business relationships During the exhibition held in New York from December, 15th to 22th, I knew your new product of N.5670, I was interesting in it. please send me a price list and instruction. thanks for your attention and wish we can establish business relationship. your sincerely Hu bin
