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新东方托福高分作文:你更想在大公司还是小公司工作?

发布时间:2013-08-02 17:34浏览次数:1088
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【题目要求

Some people prefer to work for a large company. Others prefer to work for a small company. Which would you prefer? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.

【题目分析

选择哪一个都无所谓,列出三个理由。不要忘了提及另外一种选择也有一些好处。也可以说不同的情况下可以做出不同的选择。
用户的作文(系统评分84.5分
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;缺少组织,上下文衔接欠流畅。

用户练习作文:

There is a common belief that everything own both cons and pros.I believe either working for a small company or working for a large company can bring plenty of advantages.However,from my point of view,I prefer working for a large company at the beginning when I graduate from university. First of all,large company can provide more opportunities to improve yourself in many aspects.For example,going aboard to study,meeting some big figures in your fields and since you would learn a lot when you work in such a competitive environment.What's more,large company also offers more attractive policies such as insurance policy which means more guarantee when you entire.But as we know,everything has its own shortcomings.In other words,working for a large company in a degree means more pressure and stress.On the contrary,working for a small company means more leisure or happiness. Above all mentioned,I prefer working for a large company to get more promotion and gain more for my future.

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