雅思TASK1小作文模拟题:快餐 Fast food

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Fast food became popular as the life rhythm picks up the speed after the industrial revolutions happened in the western world.As the sole super country around the world, America can be called the center of fast food,and thanks to the information involving in the pie chart above we can figure out several features of it. First of all,the hamburgers are the most welcomed amongst all the items in the research, and as a matter of fact,it is essential to detect that the prior three kinds of food whatever the pizza,french fries is the traditional and conventional food which derives from the ancient of white people,that is,the large-scale of fast food to be consumed was created by western people.On the other hand,foreign food such as tacos and sushi nevertheless is ignored by most of American teenagers. According to the comparison,we get a significant view of the comtemporary society in the USA.Although it is a open country mainly consisted by migrators,only minimal proportion of its population comes from orient areas such as Asia or from the north Ameria.