2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

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The increasing use of mobile phone in people's life As we all know,with the development of technology,it brings us a lot of convenice .And the intellective devices make our life colourful.Then the use of mobile phones is increasing rapidly.When they are crossing the street ,they are looking at the phones.Even they use a stick to help them walk safely. I tink it's too bad for people to overuse the phones to reduce using the phones.Firstly,the phones will give out powerful lights and heat which hurts our heath.Particularly it hurts people's eyes too much when he is gazing the screen of phones.Secondly,we will depend it on deeply .It is a bad habit to have.Once their is no phone ,we will feel disappointed and upset.Finally,it may be impoite sometimes to use the phone when someone is talking with us or something that is of great importance is happening. In a conclusion,the phone is just a tool to contact with others.There is no need in depend on in too much .We should use it properly and rightly.