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It isn't wisely to make the conclution as soon as you look or hear about something.There has a esay goes like that: Do not believe in what you hear but what you see.But though you see what happen by youself can be no the fact,since it might like the illustration in the desert. So that,what should we believe in?The answer can be always that:look at it and hear about it by you own ,and thinking about it carefully before you make the finally conclusion.
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