文章结构严谨,有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;有效的运用了一些复杂句;文中能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇,但词汇表达多样性不高,拼写检查还需加强。
It isn't wisely to make the conclusion as soon as you look or hear about something.There is a esay goes like that: Do not rely on what you hear but what you see.But though you see what happen by youself can be no the fact,since it might like the illustration in the desert. For example,when you look at the dark sky,you might think it the night was gose by.But it might be at the morning of a clouddly day.Or if you hearing somebody sing song and conside it as a party you may be wrong,may be it just a presice. So that,what should we believe in?The answer can be always that:look at it and hear about it by you own ,and thinking about it carefully before you make the finally conclusion.
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