高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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My hometown was very beautiful before, with green trees verywhere. The river, runing through the village, was so clear that you could see fish swimming happily. Despite the relaxing natural beauty, people's houses were very simple and the road was not wide. People worked hard but still lived a poor life. Nowadays, however, tall buildings and factories stand together, various cars run through the stree. Accompanying the development of industry, pollution becomes more and more worse. Trees get cut and fish disapper. It's of most importance and urgency to take control of the pulltion and return nature to my town.