高一英语作文模拟题:关于汽车

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Dear editor， I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we recently had about whether it is good or not for families to own cars. The car is a convenient transportation. If you have a car, you will go anywhere. The weekend, you are going to hometown with your family. The car is a quick transportation. If you want to a hospital, but the hospital is 10 miles from your house. You can drive the car. If you have a car, the car will take something to anywhere. The car is a convenient comfortable transportation. But, the car have this questions. The first, a car exhausts the waste gas. The gas is pollute the air. The second, there are much traffic accident in the world. A lot of person was died, because the traffic accident. At last, because the car is too much, you couldn't find a place stop your car.