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the impart of the internet on interpersonal communication From the picture,we could made a conclusion that with the developmet of technology,victual social tools become popular.Even between the imitate family,they have to accept and adapt the changes comes from the technology.In terms of me ,we should balance the relation between victual and reality.Ample examples can be cited to demonstrate my point of view. First,there is no doubt that the prograss of technology make a different to us and bring us more convenient and fresh air.but it reduces the chances of people talking face to face,to which may eliminate the intimate relationship.just like the picture reveals.what's more,it's significant for everybody to be companied in the real world so that the interpersonal communication is dispensable.As we all known,the impart of the internationalcommunication has its adventage and disadventage.I firmly convinces that as long as we keep balance,the internet will play an important role in personal communication. In a word,every coin has two sides.the impart of the internet on interpersonal communication is profound but we should maintain the traditional ways of communication.Talking face to face is good to build up intimate friendship.
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