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When it comes to the difine of meaningful life, it has changed from person to person. It is widely believed that being rich is a essential way to live happy life. On the country, some argue that money is not a role measurement. So, here comes the question, how can we live on a meanningful life? In my opinion, i suppose the second idea which pay more attention to our spirutual achievement. For example, we will deeply feel touched when we manage to do something seems to be impossible for us. it means we challenge ourselves, defeat ourselves and improve purselves. We can take part in considerable activities to make our life colourful. What's more, improving our qualify gradually is also a good way. Like we students, we are suppose to study hard to accomplish our goals. From what have discussed above, it is easily to draw a conclusion that we must try our best to do more mainningful things to fufill our life.
