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When it comes to the define of meaningful life, it has changed from persons to persons. It is widely believed that being rich is an essential way to live happy life. On the country, some argue that money is not a only measurement. So, here comes the question, how can we live on a meanningful life? In my opinion, I suppose the second idea which pay more attention to our spiriutual achievement. For example, we will deeply feel touched when we manage to do something seems to be impossible for us. It means we challenge ourselves, defeat ourselves and improve ourselves. We can take part in considerable activities to make our life colourful. What's more, improving our qualify gradually is also a good way. Like we students, we are suppose to study hard to accomplish our goals. From what have discussed above, it is easily to draw a conclusion that we must try our best to do more meaningful things to fufill our life.
