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hi hoest form distant of place,i konw that you are going to my hometown ,i am so happy .my hometown is a beauful place,maybe you has heared spring city,now i will intruction kunming at frist,kunming is a warm city ,in winter it is very comfortable,in summer it is cold,kunming is warm all the time,so it named spring city.but alos thre are long culture in history such as jingdian park that is describe a beauty and hore story.then you come to yunnan,you must to go to dali antqui city,dali is a so specially city which reprerent a ethnic culture of bai ethnic.in china dali is a mystery place,if you want to contact natural massage,you mecessary acheive dali.finally yunnan is a famous provience in a wlord of travel.lilake is a yunnan scenery.there are original forest,there are magic power to make you heart is peaceful.so traveller are called heart trip.
