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英语三级A卷作文模拟附范文:写邮件

发布时间:2013-05-23 22:10浏览次数:14160
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说明:假定你是胡斌,根据下列内容写一封邮件。 
发信人E-mail地址:hubin@163.com 
收信人E-mail地址:KPOHsales@hotmail.com 

内容:本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品,非常感兴趣,请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作,希望我们可以建立贸易关系。

【高频词句】 
1.price list and instruction价格单和说明书 
2.establish business relationship建立贸易关系

用户的作文(系统评分79.5分
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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。

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Generation Gap Generation gap is very popular between older people and younger people, which cause some children live far away from their parents. It will make them unhappy or even agure with each other ,and mothers think that it is like a knife piercing their heart. Both of children and parents have difference in attitude and behavior. As you can see,parents always say, "I do everything for you, my dear."but unfortunately children do not understand this because they think they are strong enough to do everything. And they do not know why parents always prevent them to do it. However ,there are something we can do to prevent the generation gap.As for parents,we should pay close attention to the growth of the young, listen to the children patiently and show trust and respect to them.Maybe parents should make friends with the children and communicate with them effectively.As the children, we need to learn to be responsible for our actions, keep our minds open to our parents and try to understand them. In a word, although our family have the generation gap we must believe we can control this problem.Family's love is the most important thing in our life, we should protect this.

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