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People will buy too much things when the famous of online festival comes called double eleven. I am one of those people who did not think about the stuff good or not and just saw the prize is suitable, so I had too many bad exprience which not only lost my money, the stuff had bad quality as well. So we have to think anything carefully before you do it, insted of do it without any plan.
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