2009年6月英语四级作文真题:博物馆免费对外开放

错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨；作者词汇量积累较好，但学术词汇的积累仍需加强，还要避免有拼写错误。

China saw mounting number of museums offering free admissions to the public. The number will keep clinbing.Museuns chaege no entry fee in order to attrac more visitors and better serve the role of educational base, promoting understanging and appreciation of our history diverse culture. However,free admission might give rise to some problems as well. One obvious problem is that exhibits are more likely to be damaged by the flock of visitors, deliberately or unconsciously.Another is that the cost of the museums would rise sharply as they have to develop their ability to manage flock of visitoes. In my opinion, the pros of free admission to museums outweigh its cons. free admission should continue since museums contribute to the enrichment of the lives of people . On the other hand, the importancce of exhibits preser vation and public safety should be informed to every visitor.Only in this way can visitors enjoy the pleasure of free admission to the full.