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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
句法知识不错，多多加强复杂句的练习；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；作者能词汇表达较准确熟练，但请仔细检查词汇的拼写。
As the development of information technology and communicatioin techonology ,the communication among pepple around the world becomes more and more convenient . This bring a lot of benefits to our life .we can easily get information from others by communicaiton .However ,there is also some disadvantages brought to us . People perfers to stay online rather than making a face to face communication .sometimes this will cause communicaiton problems. because when we communication face to face we can see each other ,hear each other. this is a full communication . however, communication on line or through only the phone ,we can only see the words or hear the voice .we cannot judge the real emotion of the other side ... Technology brings us lots of benefits ,we should use it properly to make our life colorfull and full of happiness
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