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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12882
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活,希望能更熟练地使用学术词汇行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用。

用户练习作文:

What about the Internet communication After entering the 21st century, the technology in addition to the Internet has developed quickly. And it plays an important role in our life. But I think the Internet can bring us both advantages and disadvantages, we should be careful when are chatting through Internet.First of all, I want to talk about its benefits. For example, a Chinese girl talked with her father who is in America. If there isn't Internet, they would spend many times in waiting for a letter, but the Internet can help us to communicate at anytime and anywhere. It eliminates the barrier of distance, and it is very convenience for us. The second, there are some bad influences. Young people may spend hours chatting with friends through the Internet, but rarely do they talk with others face-to-face. Some people say that they are more and more indifferent to each other in real life.So Internet chatting is a double-edged sword, we should strike a balance between Internet and reality. And we should correctly make use of the Internet.

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