2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；作者句法知识掌握的错误，可适当增加从句的使用；文中单词拼写做的很棒，再多积累些词汇就更好了；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

In china,I will take him to the sichuan province of shushan, there had been the ancient poetry for it, write it small, winding road, the bamboo forest is very beautiful, the environment is very beautiful, the air is fresh.These is no abroad, they have big, big lawn, they fail to enter the nature in his own country, I think he should like it. Not the same as the nature, not the same as the United States, will make his linger.