2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Nowadays,shopping online has becoming very popular.There are many advantages in shopping online,such as you don't have to go out to buy what you want,and there are more products you can choose online.The most important is it's very convinient.But there is the thing.You think you don't have to go out to shopping,so you always stay at home or domitory.Second,if you surff the internet usually like taobao,you'll buy lots of things you don't need.Third,some of the products in internet are not believable.Last,you may spend more money shopping online. In my piont of view,shopping online should keep your mind.When you shopping online,you should ask yourself,"Are these things I really need?"And pay more attention on the instrucments from the information.Although shop online is convenient,go out shopping in the supermarket is not bad.