2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Welcome you to my hometown Wuzhou, hope you'll like it here. There are many beautiful places in my hometown. Let me introduce one one for you, first of all from the aspects of eating began to drip into the Pearl ice Chuen, Soybean Milk and well-known guiling paste, and then the scenery there is the Dragon Mother Temple, Baiyun Mountain, San Wen Yuan, these are our specialty in Wuzhou and the scenery