高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

作者词汇量偏少，但单词拼写做的不错；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；衔接词汇很少，建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

I live in a small hometown.My hometown used to be very beautiful.There were surround by green trees.Near the hometown has a small ,long and clear river.In the river,there are many fishes and shrimps.People could go fishing.The house were very small and simple.The streets were long and small,but people living is happy.However,now, a lot of tall buildings stand in hometown.And many cars in the big streets.Industrial development environment deterioration.A lot of trees and fishes were killed.So I think pollution control priority.