拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;全文结构较为严谨;有效的运用了一些复杂句;请注意分段。
Jack is severely crippled, often subject himself to shame and stress, but he never complained or show any envy of others. Even if the weather is bad, he can go to work ;and try to participate in activities. All of these often amazing his colleagues inwardly None of them refused to walk with him, although it's hard to coordinate their steps. Colleagues to let him put his hand on their shoulders to keep balance. They adjust to Jack pace, followed him