内容:本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品,非常感兴趣,请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作,希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
【高频词句】
1.price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2.establish business relationship建立贸易关系
作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文中词汇表达不够丰富,学术词汇方面要多累积;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;连词使用偏少。
Dear kudo, I am delighted to invite you to come to our class's activity,and it will held in next sunday from 19:30 to 21:30.It would be a great pleasure to meet you in the activity.All of us are waiting for your coming.We will be very pleased if you could attend. I look forward to hearing you soon. Yours sincerely, Helen.