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today shopping on online is more and more popular in the life. because of so many people choose shopping on online ,there are some problems about shopping on online. shopping on online have so many advantages,we can buy the some goods by a cheaper price. on online shopping spends less time on the shopping .we need not to stay at the shop to choose goods .but now,wo only need to use our computer .because of the cheaper and more convenient .it become a good choose formang people .but on online shopping have so many disadvantages.many people buy something that they do not need in the life .and other people will find their goods is different from the picture on the computer . in my opinion ,first of all,we should think better if the goods is useful for us .then we should talk to the shoper on the line .it can help you better understand your goods.at last ,if you are deceived on the shopping.you need to call the policeman at now!
