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2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:37浏览次数:9581
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题目 My views on Online Shopping
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1. 现在网购已经成为一种时尚  
2. 网上购物有很多好处,但也有不少问题 
3. 我的建议 
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用户的作文(系统评分73.5分
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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;可适当增加从句使用,注意极个别句子错误;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用;请注意分段。

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Nowadays, online shopping more and more popular.Due to a lot of people in online shopping, online shopping create many problems.Online shopping has many advantages.We can buy the same things online is more cheaper.Online shopping spend less time than the reality, we don't need to choose goods in the shop, you just need us to use the computer.Because online shopping cheap and convenient, he became a lot of people a good choice.But online shopping also has a lot of unexpected problems.Many people will find that the things they buy is don't need in life.There are a lot of people find the things they buy back and pictures on the computer is far!First of all, in my opinion, you should think before you buy what you buy is what you need?Then you should negotiate with the shopkeeper good, so that you can better understand what do you want to buy the goods.Finally, if you feel you have been deceived, you should call the police right away!

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