作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨;文章用词太过单一,且单词拼写错误较多;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
As we all know, China's Got Talent is a program where everyone have a chance to show themseives to people arround the world. It provide a chance for ordinary being to make their dreams of stardom come ture. If I have a chance to participate in a talent show, I would make thorough preparations to show myself to all the audience by all means.