小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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l have some good friends,we are all live in the same city.so we can go to shop alltogether.one of them name lily,she is a teather.she work in a school.she is a lovely girl,she offen help some one who cannot discover things.l love she as my good friend.sometimes we go trip together .