2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

文中单词拼写做的很棒，再多积累些词汇就更好了；作者句法很棒，合理使用了复杂句；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用；请注意分段；连词使用偏少；可以适当增加副词的使用。

As we all know, China's Got Talent is a stage where everyone have a chance to show themselves to people around the world. It provides a chance for ordinary being to make their dreams of stardom come true. People of all ages and of different place with their own special purpose come to the stage to show their talent. If I have a chance to participate in the talent show, I would do my best to make thorough preparations to show myself to all the audience by all means.