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作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；作者句法很棒，合理使用了复杂句；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。
As we all know, China's Got Talent is a stage where everyone have a chance to show themselves to people around the world. It provides a chance for ordinary being to make their dreams of stardom come true. People of all ages and of different place with their own special purpose come to the stage to show their talent. If I have a chance to participate in the talent show, I would do my best to make thorough preparations to show myself to all the audience by all means. The reason why I want to participate in the talent show is that my mother always wishes that one day her daughter could bravely stand on a grand stage to sing a song.
