2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Welcome to my hometown ,in my coutrysiade ,POYANG lake is the most interestingplace.in china,we all know POYANG lake is the biggest lake without salt.in spring,everywhere is fulled with green grass.the blue sky is hanging on the lake.fishman paddle ship on the lake and with the fair-sounding voice.in the summer,birds flying on the sky