过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;文章词汇表达比较丰富,但学术词汇稍显欠缺,此外拼写检查要重视。
It is time to draw a conclusion? It is false ways that people generally make a conclusion when they saw or heard in the first time. Because this is prejudice that make a conclusion in the first time. A little boy,who steal money from looks like a nice man, then people generally blames him but no one ask him why. a poor boy may be need money to eating, to raise his friend or feed a little more boy or girl. otherwise a evil groud which abduct and traffic childrens are behind the little boy. so if a fact, do you still think the little boy was a bad man. everything is impossible! so not too late to draw a conclusion.
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