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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:38浏览次数:11301
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

用户的作文(系统评分54.5分
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文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;全文结构较为严谨;文章词汇表达多样性不足,不过词汇拼写要再接再厉;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

用户练习作文:

Now, more and more sutdents ues thier mobile phones to school, But qusetion is students should be take their mobile phones to school? I think mobile phone is one of fastest information communication , On the one hand,mobile phones can cantact their parents anytime, But other hand people are crossing the street looking at their mobile phones and using walking sticks in order to see,it's too dangerous . In my opinion,The 21th century,I don't think wrong follow the fashion,But the important thing is How to use the mobile phones. We can send message ,just spend 0.01Yuan , And we can call ours parents If we have matter.But qusetions come, many students use mobile phone in class . Howver, Whatever you like mobile phone or not, mobile phone alreay change oue life.

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