英语三级B卷作文模拟附范文:拟通知

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文章用词太过单一，且单词拼写错误较多；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；可以适当增加副词的使用；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少。

Notice Visiting the farm in QingLong county on June 20th, 2010. Itinerary: 1. General director introduce briefly some foundermental conditions to us at half past eight o'clock in the morning at the farm office. 2. Visiting the farm at 9:30. 3. Visiting the factory held by the farm at 10:30. 4. Be guests in the farm at 11:30. All those people who want to take part are going to set out in front of library at 6:30 in the morning. We will be set out on schdule at 6:40.